Itβs hard to see what waits around the bend in a road, hiding behind fog and trees and dust. I wish I could have known. I wish I had taken the exit. I wish I had held your hand tighter.
Ongoing challenge: Find a picture. Write exactly 40 words about it. Post.
(Great practice for brevity.)
All the things we cannot know. Lovely image and word sketch. Brevity really is a good thing to practice – something I probably need to do more often – cannot even do so in a comment! π Well done!
π Thank you! There’s so much you can say and so much you can leave to readers’ imaginations. This is one of my favorite practices.
It is effective.