Know.

by | Fiction in Forty | 2 comments

beach contraption

You kiss me in the salty morning light. The sea sits calm behind us, but my heart is pitching, anything but calm. Then I feel the grit of sand chafing the back of my legs. And that’s when I know.

Challenge: Find a picture. Write exactly 40 words about it. Post.
(Great practice for brevity.)

2 Comments

  1. charnellpeters
    charnellpeters on February 27, 2015 at 4:05 pm

    This is an excellent practice in brevity! I might have to try this! Beautiful piece 🙂

    • racheltoalson
      racheltoalson on February 27, 2015 at 5:01 pm

      Thanks, Charnell! It’s really a great practice!